Peers Review of Discussion 2

Provide Classmate comment on their post for this following discussion :

Now it is time to select your topic for the process essay. When thinking of a topic to write about, remember for a good essay you need an introduction paragraph, a minimum of three paragraphs for the body, and a conclusion paragraph. All need to be fully developed. 

Here are some sample process essay topics just to get you thinking…how to change a tire, how to write a resume, how to be a good parent, how to succeed in college, and how to play baseball. Develop a topic that you have knowledge of and interests you.

Complete the following steps:

1. Decide on a topic for your process essay. Select one that details how to ____________. Keep in mind that your topic should be one that you can describe in a five-paragraph essay (approximately 500 words).
2. Use a prewriting technique to brainstorm your topic.
3. Create a tentative thesis statement for your essay that clearly states the process you will be describing.
4. Develop an outline for your essay using the following format:

Thesis Statement

1.  
   1.  
      1. Topic Sentence for Step One of the Process
         1. Specific Evidence
         2. Specific Evidence
         3. Specific Evidence
      2. Topic Sentence for Step Two of the Process
         1. Specific Evidence
         2. Specific Evidence
         3. Specific Evidence
      3. Topic Sentence for Step Three of the Process
         1. Specific Evidence
         2. Specific Evidence
         3. Specific Evidence
      4. Continue Format If More Steps

ClassMate Post :

Thesis Statement

To make the perfect pizza, one must know how to stretch, be proficient at saucing and topping, and they must know the proper temperature and time to cook the pizza to perfection.

Step 1:

The person stretching needs to ensure that the dough is properly proofed. If the dough isn’t proofed correctly it could lead to an uneven texture and poor baking outcomes.

They must then form a crust with the dough, slowly stretching to ensure that the dough stays consistent throughout.

Finally, the slap, taking the dough and slapping it between their hands or tossing it in the air guarantees that it will further stretch and refine the shape of the pizza. Pulling from the center just enough to keep the dough consistent throughout.

Step 2:

The sauce needs to be even and exact without smears or clumps. Too much and the pizza will become soggy, while too little and the pizza will leave it dry.

Toppings such as Ham or Pepperoni should be spaced evenly and have the appropriate number.

Other toppings should be distributed evenly, avoiding clumping in the center. This ensures that flavor is distributed throughout every bite.

Step 3:

Make sure that the oven is preheated and set to 470 degrees.

In the oven bubbles are a major concern, and they need to be handled promptly to ensure quality by poking them or flatting them with a long tong or stick.

Make sure to check the crust for around 6 to 7 minutes to guarantee the crust is golden and crisping up without overcooking.