Peers Review of assignment

Provide 2 different peers comment for their assignments discussion   1 paragraph each and label peers comment 1 and peers comment  2 on the same paper the assignment instruction is as follow 

To analyze the paragraph you have chosen, follow these instructions:

1. Post the paragraph to this discussion.
2. List the author and source of your selection.
3. Identify the dominant paragraph pattern.
4. Explain why it fits the selected paragraph pattern.
5. Explain each of the four bases of effective writing and how the paragraph has or has not met each.