read essay below and critique it
Read and critique the essay attatched below. Has to be at least 2-3 pages and MLA cited. Essay and essay outline files are all attached along with notes taken about the essay.
outline for essay
https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1595941/down…
article to critique
https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…
notes from article
https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…
topic sentence examples/ideas
https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file…
titles and hooks
https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1596090/down…
main points to include